Thursday, February 9, 2017

Olivia Onate Week 5

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10 comments:

  1. I love your photos! You control the depth of field well. The first picture is well-focused. And the portrait is sharp. Some of them show your change in shutter speed.

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  2. Some of your pictures, like those of the rocks, show great texture of the rocks but the background is too bright. I would suggest burning the background in photoshop.

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  3. Nice images! Your first photo is my favorite because of its perspective, sharpness, and contrast. Your other photos are nice too. The picture of the girl feels a little too bright. The palm trees capture great angles.

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  4. The shots of the rocks and water are really beautiful! I think the contrast and composition of the photo with the girl could be improved, but the others are very strong!

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  5. The background comes off a little too bright sometimes but the photo subjects are very strong. The length of exposure on the pond one is very intriguing because of the water's natural movement, good job capturing that.

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  6. I love that you played around with shutter speed with the water. However, i think on some of your photos your exposure was too bright. Very cool compostion with the plants.

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  7. I like the composition of the pictures of the leaves, and how you trying out different angles to make them looks different. but the picture of the girl seems a bit overexposed.

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  8. I liked the detail that you were able to capture but some of your photos were too bright.

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  9. I think the texture in some of your photos can be overwhelming, but in certain images you compensated for the overload of information with some blurring (which works great). eg, the second image versus the first one, they both have pretty much the same subject but the second has a greater depth/blurs the detail in the water and distant rocks so that the viewer only sees in detail the rocks closest to the lens. If for the first image you'd blurred the rocks and focused on the water, it would've had the same softening effect. otherwise, I think a greater variety would be beneficial, not necessarily in the subject matter since there's so much you can shoot with just one environment/subject, but maybe experiment more with angle and zoom instead of a lot of distant shots, then a lot of close ups of the same kind of plant.

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  10. I enjoyed how you captured the movement of water in different ways, especially the little rip tides on the 3rd one. Like everyone else said I agree the picture of the girl is a little to bright and for the last one Im not really sure where your focus is.

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