Your panning photos came out amazing! I enjoyed how in the photos of the girl taking a shower you omitted her face, I think it gives the an interesting appeal.
I really liked the light trails on the cars, nice work! For me, the first two suffered from being a little TOO light if you catch my drift, I would be interested in seeing a version with more dark colors
Your photos are really interesting. Some of them came out grainy which detracts from their appeal. Your subject matter is intriguing. When I think of freeze frame photos I think of really crisp photos so I'm bummed some of them aren't super crisp. But your panning shots are great, you capture motion very well.
I like how you capture the dripping of water from the girl's hair in the last two photos, and I agree those panning pictures of cars are super cool! But the second panning picture can be better if you focus more on the composition of the photo.
You did a good job with the tunnel and car photos. Although you successfully captured the motion of the water in the shower photos I felt like the ones you chose weren't as strong compositionally compared to some of the others.
I really appreciate the fact that you experimented with the night, and I think that those images came out very successful.I think the other half of your photos could have been more successful if you would have thought about composition and perspective.I also agree that you should have adjusted your exposure for the first two.
Your experimentation with light and motion really paid off! Those are your strongest shots! I think the photos on the scooter could benefit from some editing, but you did a good job of employing all the techniques we learned.
Your panning photos came out amazing! I enjoyed how in the photos of the girl taking a shower you omitted her face, I think it gives the an interesting appeal.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the light trails on the cars, nice work! For me, the first two suffered from being a little TOO light if you catch my drift, I would be interested in seeing a version with more dark colors
ReplyDeleteYour photos are really interesting. Some of them came out grainy which detracts from their appeal. Your subject matter is intriguing. When I think of freeze frame photos I think of really crisp photos so I'm bummed some of them aren't super crisp. But your panning shots are great, you capture motion very well.
ReplyDeleteI like how you capture the dripping of water from the girl's hair in the last two photos, and I agree those panning pictures of cars are super cool! But the second panning picture can be better if you focus more on the composition of the photo.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job with the tunnel and car photos. Although you successfully captured the motion of the water in the shower photos I felt like the ones you chose weren't as strong compositionally compared to some of the others.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate the fact that you experimented with the night, and I think that those images came out very successful.I think the other half of your photos could have been more successful if you would have thought about composition and perspective.I also agree that you should have adjusted your exposure for the first two.
ReplyDeleteYour experimentation with light and motion really paid off! Those are your strongest shots! I think the photos on the scooter could benefit from some editing, but you did a good job of employing all the techniques we learned.
ReplyDeleteThe panning photos are really cool! However, the exposure of the first two photos are too strong. Good job!
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