Your pictures are successful this week! The second picture is the best in my opinion, but I wish the background was a little more blurry because it distracts from the texture. The evening one with the frame is good as well, but the line doesn't line up with the natural line of the photo corner. (Think the satisfaction of that DVD video bouncing thing)
In your 7th photo I would've liked to see your subject either more centered or I would've liked to see you use the rule of thirds to compose your subject. On your last one I would've tried to photoshop out the embers because they are a bit distracting and draw the viewer away from the subject.
The photo of the star is really strong. The rusted ring provides an interesting texture. The sixth photo has an interesting composition and good contrast. Some of the other images could be pushed with a different perspective or more dynamic composition.
The 7th photo look like is taken unintentional, I think you can try to make your model "modeled stand" there rather than "casually stand" there, nevertheless, the composition and the shadow on the beach and the light on the right side of the picture is still good. Also, I have to say I disagree with Michael's comment on the last photo about the embers. Those embers are a part of the subject, and they make the upper left corner of the photo not pitch-dark.
The last picture of the fire is very nice because of the little specs of light in the background but the other one is doesn't really capture my attention.
I actually like that the 6th image doesn't line up corner-wise because its current composition is essentially the golden ratio. I agree that image 7 doesn't seem to be pushing for centered subject, but isn't quite following rule of thirds either - dedication to one or the other would make it feel more intentional. I find that pictures of fire all generally kind of.. look the same, though the last image does bring some interest because of the sparks - basically agreeing with Valentina.
I think image 2 is my favorite, the subject has character and the photo itself is sharp, balanced, diverse in values.
Your photos have strong composition overall, but I feel like they all look very similar with the heavy editing, but maybe that's your style showing through.
Your photos are always nicely edited, which I think is important for making your photos seem polished. The last photo with the fire is so sharp and I love that you played with asymmetry. Overall, I think the night photos are very successful. The balance of the fourth to last photo seems off to me, and I think that it doesn't really follow the rule of thirds. I also think that in the first photo, the subjects are fully in the center. In addition, the balance of the third photo is off. I also don't really see how the lighting in the selfie affects the mood.
The composition and values on all of these is great! The first might look a bit snapshot-y, but I think you did a good job at capturing the water droplets so crisply.
Your pictures are successful this week! The second picture is the best in my opinion, but I wish the background was a little more blurry because it distracts from the texture. The evening one with the frame is good as well, but the line doesn't line up with the natural line of the photo corner. (Think the satisfaction of that DVD video bouncing thing)
ReplyDeleteIn your 7th photo I would've liked to see your subject either more centered or I would've liked to see you use the rule of thirds to compose your subject. On your last one I would've tried to photoshop out the embers because they are a bit distracting and draw the viewer away from the subject.
ReplyDeleteThe photo of the star is really strong. The rusted ring provides an interesting texture. The sixth photo has an interesting composition and good contrast. Some of the other images could be pushed with a different perspective or more dynamic composition.
ReplyDeleteThe 7th photo look like is taken unintentional, I think you can try to make your model "modeled stand" there rather than "casually stand" there, nevertheless, the composition and the shadow on the beach and the light on the right side of the picture is still good. Also, I have to say I disagree with Michael's comment on the last photo about the embers. Those embers are a part of the subject, and they make the upper left corner of the photo not pitch-dark.
ReplyDeleteThe last picture of the fire is very nice because of the little specs of light in the background but the other one is doesn't really capture my attention.
ReplyDeleteI actually like that the 6th image doesn't line up corner-wise because its current composition is essentially the golden ratio. I agree that image 7 doesn't seem to be pushing for centered subject, but isn't quite following rule of thirds either - dedication to one or the other would make it feel more intentional. I find that pictures of fire all generally kind of.. look the same, though the last image does bring some interest because of the sparks - basically agreeing with Valentina.
ReplyDeleteI think image 2 is my favorite, the subject has character and the photo itself is sharp, balanced, diverse in values.
Your photos have strong composition overall, but I feel like they all look very similar with the heavy editing, but maybe that's your style showing through.
ReplyDeleteYou did well in designing your photos. The sixth image interests me most. However, the first and seventh just look like snapshots.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are always nicely edited, which I think is important for making your photos seem polished. The last photo with the fire is so sharp and I love that you played with asymmetry. Overall, I think the night photos are very successful. The balance of the fourth to last photo seems off to me, and I think that it doesn't really follow the rule of thirds. I also think that in the first photo, the subjects are fully in the center. In addition, the balance of the third photo is off. I also don't really see how the lighting in the selfie affects the mood.
ReplyDeleteThe composition and values on all of these is great! The first might look a bit snapshot-y, but I think you did a good job at capturing the water droplets so crisply.
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