A lot of these photos are of every day object. That being said, I wish you captured them in more unrecognizable ways to make it more engaging. The bus photos have nice contrast but they're repetitive.
These photos came out a little grainy, but they did make me interested in pizza boxes as a photo subject so good on you for that. There wasn't a lot of variation in the bus photos and I would like to see more dynamic shots if you shoot on the bus in the future.
I wish you would've had more of a variety instead of having some photos that were redundant. I agree with some of the previous comments that some of your photos are grainy. I think that some of your photos could've have benefited from being edited more. I would try to push yourself next week with composition and perspective!
These are all really interesting! I think for the last two the composition could have been a bit stronger if you were able to take the photo without the bar blocking her face. That might just be a personal opinion though!
It's a great idea to chose to take pictures of objects from your daily life and document your daily life, but try some creative angles and perspectives to make them look not so "daily"! For example, the fifth picture of people's feet on the bus is a good start!
There's a bit of graininess but I'm not sure if that's from before or after editing lightness/darkness in photoshop. Anyway, aside from that I think you handled contrast and selective focus (depth) pretty well. If this were to be a series, I think a bit more variation/less repetition would be a good boost to its overall strength - maybe more unusual angles? Instead of two shots of the same person, for example. I don't think there's anything wrong with shooting the "mundane."
I feel like you could have pushed your photos a bit further in terms of creativity. Even if your interest is on shooting everyday objects it'd be interesting to see them portrayed in an extraordinary way. My favorite photo, besides the Colombian cup of course, is the one where it only shows the feet of the people on the bus. I like the angle and the depth of field. I just wish you would have focused on the shoes instead of the chairs.
In these photos, you captured some stuffs and people in our daily life. The depth of field worked well in your images. I love your photos!
ReplyDeleteYour indoor photos could be made better by playing with contrast in photoshop. They don't have quite enough variation in darks and lights.
ReplyDeleteA lot of these photos are of every day object. That being said, I wish you captured them in more unrecognizable ways to make it more engaging. The bus photos have nice contrast but they're repetitive.
ReplyDeleteI really like the photos on the buses. I think some of the compositions are more dynamic than others, but they are still cool shots.
ReplyDeleteThese photos came out a little grainy, but they did make me interested in pizza boxes as a photo subject so good on you for that. There wasn't a lot of variation in the bus photos and I would like to see more dynamic shots if you shoot on the bus in the future.
ReplyDeleteI wish you would've had more of a variety instead of having some photos that were redundant. I agree with some of the previous comments that some of your photos are grainy. I think that some of your photos could've have benefited from being edited more. I would try to push yourself next week with composition and perspective!
ReplyDeleteThese are all really interesting! I think for the last two the composition could have been a bit stronger if you were able to take the photo without the bar blocking her face. That might just be a personal opinion though!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great idea to chose to take pictures of objects from your daily life and document your daily life, but try some creative angles and perspectives to make them look not so "daily"! For example, the fifth picture of people's feet on the bus is a good start!
ReplyDeleteThere's a bit of graininess but I'm not sure if that's from before or after editing lightness/darkness in photoshop. Anyway, aside from that I think you handled contrast and selective focus (depth) pretty well. If this were to be a series, I think a bit more variation/less repetition would be a good boost to its overall strength - maybe more unusual angles? Instead of two shots of the same person, for example. I don't think there's anything wrong with shooting the "mundane."
ReplyDeleteI feel like you could have pushed your photos a bit further in terms of creativity. Even if your interest is on shooting everyday objects it'd be interesting to see them portrayed in an extraordinary way. My favorite photo, besides the Colombian cup of course, is the one where it only shows the feet of the people on the bus. I like the angle and the depth of field. I just wish you would have focused on the shoes instead of the chairs.
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