Your photos are sharp and have good contrast. You did well in composing your photos. However, for the last one, the half column on the right side is distracting.
The stoplight photo is my favorite, you really framed it successfully. The rest are very geometric in quality and some, like the 4th image, need a little work appearing level as the roof flourishes unbalance the different line angle of the building above it.
I really think you have a sharp eye for photography and i really appreciate how you focus on shooting buildings. I like that you played around with asymmetry this week with your compositions. But, something about the second to last photo seems a bit off to me. I think it would've been more successful if it was captured at a different angle, so that the building in the back was at a different position.
I think a strong point of your images is the relationship between the subject and the negative space (2, 3, 6) and how they way you framed them keeps them from feeling unbalanced despite clear asymmetry (notably 6). Images 1 and 7 are my favorites - they're balanced in composition, weighted equally in value, feature line, 7 in particular wouldn't have worked imo without the traffic camera thing, but with it the shapes it creates in interaction with other elements are interesting to look at.
Image 9 has a strange composition, where the lamp and the trees on either side push for a strong symmetry but is prevented by the building in the background. i'm not sure if the cropping of image 10 bothers me, usually objects that are cut off half-way make awkwardness/tension but in this case it also feels balanced (value-wise, maybe).
The 8th photo is the one most attractive to me, not only because of the light on the leaves and the gate, but also because of the contrast between the texture of the plant (soft and weak) and the texture of the steel gate (hard and stiff). I think you have a interesting perspective of shooting architectures, however, the 1st and 5th picture are not quite as strong as the others to me, I can't understand why they are composite that way.
These photos really scream "Jenna". I feel like your photos are most successful when they have a clear background, such as the stop light with the white background. I found myself looking for these in your other photos and would've liked to see more of that.
Your eye for architecture shows in these images. You are able to show the viewer the way you see the buildings rather than just taking snapshots. It's clear you are purposeful in your framing and composition.
All of these have great contrast and sharpness! You make every day things interesting to look at. I think the third photo isn't as strong as your others.
I admire they way you frame and compose your photographs, however I wished you played more with like shooting from different angles. Maybe if you got on the floor and shot a building from that angle.
All of these images strongly feature a clear focal point and balanced contrast. I think negative space is a really important element to consider when taking photos, but it can be a little repetitive.
Your photos are sharp and have good contrast. You did well in composing your photos. However, for the last one, the half column on the right side is distracting.
ReplyDeleteThe stoplight photo is my favorite, you really framed it successfully. The rest are very geometric in quality and some, like the 4th image, need a little work appearing level as the roof flourishes unbalance the different line angle of the building above it.
ReplyDeleteI really think you have a sharp eye for photography and i really appreciate how you focus on shooting buildings. I like that you played around with asymmetry this week with your compositions. But, something about the second to last photo seems a bit off to me. I think it would've been more successful if it was captured at a different angle, so that the building in the back was at a different position.
ReplyDeleteI think a strong point of your images is the relationship between the subject and the negative space (2, 3, 6) and how they way you framed them keeps them from feeling unbalanced despite clear asymmetry (notably 6). Images 1 and 7 are my favorites - they're balanced in composition, weighted equally in value, feature line, 7 in particular wouldn't have worked imo without the traffic camera thing, but with it the shapes it creates in interaction with other elements are interesting to look at.
ReplyDeleteImage 9 has a strange composition, where the lamp and the trees on either side push for a strong symmetry but is prevented by the building in the background. i'm not sure if the cropping of image 10 bothers me, usually objects that are cut off half-way make awkwardness/tension but in this case it also feels balanced (value-wise, maybe).
The 8th photo is the one most attractive to me, not only because of the light on the leaves and the gate, but also because of the contrast between the texture of the plant (soft and weak) and the texture of the steel gate (hard and stiff). I think you have a interesting perspective of shooting architectures, however, the 1st and 5th picture are not quite as strong as the others to me, I can't understand why they are composite that way.
ReplyDeleteThese photos really scream "Jenna". I feel like your photos are most successful when they have a clear background, such as the stop light with the white background. I found myself looking for these in your other photos and would've liked to see more of that.
ReplyDeleteYour eye for architecture shows in these images. You are able to show the viewer the way you see the buildings rather than just taking snapshots. It's clear you are purposeful in your framing and composition.
ReplyDeleteAll of these have great contrast and sharpness! You make every day things interesting to look at. I think the third photo isn't as strong as your others.
ReplyDeleteI admire they way you frame and compose your photographs, however I wished you played more with like shooting from different angles. Maybe if you got on the floor and shot a building from that angle.
ReplyDeleteAll of these images strongly feature a clear focal point and balanced contrast. I think negative space is a really important element to consider when taking photos, but it can be a little repetitive.
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