I think you are doing a great job using all the techniques and compose your photos intentionally. But I suggest you to pay attention to the too light/too dark in your photos which are visually distracted.
I think your first image is not as strong as the rest of them because the angle is not really appealing. Overall your images have a nice contrast except for the 9th image. It is a bit gray but I think its because we were shooting in a shadowy area.
I think a little bit more variation in angles could go a long way. Most of these she's facing right at a profile or almost a profile. Overall I think these have strong compositions, and you were successful at using lighting to affect the model. I especially like how you took advantage of the cast shadow in the 7th.
The shadows behind the model in the 10th photo are distracting and could have been avoid by taking the photo closer or at a different angle. I think that goes with some others as well - it would've been interesting to have seen a variety of images where some were taken closer. I think the 7th photo is the most successful because the shadow on her face is dramatic and stunning.
The way you framed the subject was done successfully throughout your images. my biggest concern is that the flowers are distracting in many of your photos that included them. In the 7th image (my personal favorite) you were able to make the flowers less distracting and compose an interesting image with the use of the shadow.
Overall these images are quite successful. Your editing is nice, of course I'm partial to higher contrast, but I think that could have benefited your photos by separating the model from her backgrounds.
The subject was in focus most of the time, but in the third image you selected it turned out blurry and the flowers turned out to be the subject. The model appears to be a little pissed and I think different angles would really help your compositions.
I think your first image is the most successful because of it's use of space and symmetry. Many of our pictures have kind of wonky angles because of circumstances, but this image has really strong framing.
I think you are doing a great job using all the techniques and compose your photos intentionally. But I suggest you to pay attention to the too light/too dark in your photos which are visually distracted.
ReplyDeleteI think your first image is not as strong as the rest of them because the angle is not really appealing. Overall your images have a nice contrast except for the 9th image. It is a bit gray but I think its because we were shooting in a shadowy area.
ReplyDeleteI think a little bit more variation in angles could go a long way. Most of these she's facing right at a profile or almost a profile. Overall I think these have strong compositions, and you were successful at using lighting to affect the model. I especially like how you took advantage of the cast shadow in the 7th.
ReplyDeleteThe shadows behind the model in the 10th photo are distracting and could have been avoid by taking the photo closer or at a different angle. I think that goes with some others as well - it would've been interesting to have seen a variety of images where some were taken closer. I think the 7th photo is the most successful because the shadow on her face is dramatic and stunning.
ReplyDeleteThe way you framed the subject was done successfully throughout your images. my biggest concern is that the flowers are distracting in many of your photos that included them. In the 7th image (my personal favorite) you were able to make the flowers less distracting and compose an interesting image with the use of the shadow.
ReplyDeleteOverall these images are quite successful. Your editing is nice, of course I'm partial to higher contrast, but I think that could have benefited your photos by separating the model from her backgrounds.
ReplyDeleteThe subject was in focus most of the time, but in the third image you selected it turned out blurry and the flowers turned out to be the subject. The model appears to be a little pissed and I think different angles would really help your compositions.
ReplyDeleteI think your first image is the most successful because of it's use of space and symmetry. Many of our pictures have kind of wonky angles because of circumstances, but this image has really strong framing.
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