It really amazes me how you can make regular objects appear more interesting by using the different elements of designs to compose your photos. Maybe a bit more contrast in your first and 5th photographs can help the image a bit more.
Besides a couple of tilt issues, these are very interesting. The bottle picture could use some work though on making it purposeful. One bottle almost lines up with the shadow, why not move the other bottle to match the other long shadow and see how that looks.
The composition in your photos is awesome. The second one shows a strong contrast between moving and freezing. However, the 5th could have been better if you would made the lines more obvious.
These compositions are really eye catching! Especially how they're all everyday objects/scenery made to look more interesting. I think the first one could use just a liiittle boost in contrast to make it a even stronger. I really like how you're able to capture very subtle gradients in shadow in your photos.
Most of your photos came out fantastic but there are others that could have been pushed further such as your 5th photo which suffered from not having enough contrast.
Really intriguing photos! Your compositions are feeling intentional which I so appreciate. The only ones I'm not understanding are 5 & 8. As mentioned previously, the lack of contrast in 5 makes the lines get lost. The brick wall doesn't stand out as unique to me because that is a texture that we see every day.
I think some of these images are stunning and very unique!! I know that we debated this in class, but I personally think a higher contrast on image 1 would have made it more dramatic. Your fourth and fifth images could have been a little more interesting, perhaps you could have used a different composition technique with the bird such as the rule of thirds, or even have tried a different perspective when shooting both of those images. I think that you should try to play around with interacting with your subjects like moving the bottles to different positions, which could push your images a little further.
I love the use of leading lines in some of these shots! The third, seventh, and tenth photo are really strong. Some of the water ones are a little bright and not as interesting.
I feel like you can use the lightness of your photos to your advantage - it's particular to your style.
ReplyDeleteIt really amazes me how you can make regular objects appear more interesting by using the different elements of designs to compose your photos. Maybe a bit more contrast in your first and 5th photographs can help the image a bit more.
ReplyDeleteBesides a couple of tilt issues, these are very interesting. The bottle picture could use some work though on making it purposeful. One bottle almost lines up with the shadow, why not move the other bottle to match the other long shadow and see how that looks.
ReplyDeleteThe composition in your photos is awesome. The second one shows a strong contrast between moving and freezing. However, the 5th could have been better if you would made the lines more obvious.
ReplyDeleteThese compositions are really eye catching! Especially how they're all everyday objects/scenery made to look more interesting. I think the first one could use just a liiittle boost in contrast to make it a even stronger. I really like how you're able to capture very subtle gradients in shadow in your photos.
ReplyDeleteMost of your photos came out fantastic but there are others that could have been pushed further such as your 5th photo which suffered from not having enough contrast.
ReplyDeleteReally intriguing photos! Your compositions are feeling intentional which I so appreciate. The only ones I'm not understanding are 5 & 8. As mentioned previously, the lack of contrast in 5 makes the lines get lost. The brick wall doesn't stand out as unique to me because that is a texture that we see every day.
ReplyDeleteI think some of these images are stunning and very unique!! I know that we debated this in class, but I personally think a higher contrast on image 1 would have made it more dramatic. Your fourth and fifth images could have been a little more interesting, perhaps you could have used a different composition technique with the bird such as the rule of thirds, or even have tried a different perspective when shooting both of those images. I think that you should try to play around with interacting with your subjects like moving the bottles to different positions, which could push your images a little further.
ReplyDeleteI love the use of leading lines in some of these shots! The third, seventh, and tenth photo are really strong. Some of the water ones are a little bright and not as interesting.
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