You did a great job of capturing the whiteness of the face with the whiteness of the milk? in the bath tub. The one picture that really needs some contrast though is the second image on the lips.. On one of mine Kashif told me that I needed to have the model wear lipstick so that her lips stood out. On the first image there's a black sort of vignette coming from the right side that distracts/unbalances from the compelling visuals in the image.
I like your choice of material (the white liquid which I am not so sure what that is) which created a strong contrast with the human body and especially the hair which are darker. also in my opinion the picture with your model's eyes closed (#5) comes out more successful than the one with her eyes a bit open (#6). and the composition of #2 doesn't make too much sense to me.
Really good contrast in all of these, I especially like where it's more subtle! Your use of lighting is very interesting and I think you pulled it off well, especially how you used it to affect the mood.
The photos where you don't notice the person is in a tub feel much stronger than those that aren't and if there were a way to pull that off on all of them, I recommend it.
I think Davis' comment is spot on. The lipstick would make these even more dramatic but I love that you are continuing to explore the human body and add different materials to enhance your images. I also agree with Michael, the more abstract photos are more successful .
I love that you used a milky water for your photos, it enhances the creativity. I can really see the intent with your photos. I really love the 9th photo because of the light skin with the milky water. I really appreciate your use of lighting in your photos, but in some of your photos theres a distracting ring around your subject. It would have been cool to see you use asymmetry or the rule of thirds while shooting, so that you have different weighted compositions.
The shots of her face emerging from the water are really striking. Some of these could use more contrast in the details, but overall your experimentation with light really paid off.
You did a great job of capturing the whiteness of the face with the whiteness of the milk? in the bath tub. The one picture that really needs some contrast though is the second image on the lips.. On one of mine Kashif told me that I needed to have the model wear lipstick so that her lips stood out. On the first image there's a black sort of vignette coming from the right side that distracts/unbalances from the compelling visuals in the image.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting concept and compositions!The only thing I can think of is that I wish your 2nd and last photos were less grainy.
ReplyDeleteI like your choice of material (the white liquid which I am not so sure what that is) which created a strong contrast with the human body and especially the hair which are darker. also in my opinion the picture with your model's eyes closed (#5) comes out more successful than the one with her eyes a bit open (#6). and the composition of #2 doesn't make too much sense to me.
ReplyDeleteReally good contrast in all of these, I especially like where it's more subtle! Your use of lighting is very interesting and I think you pulled it off well, especially how you used it to affect the mood.
ReplyDeleteThe photos where you don't notice the person is in a tub feel much stronger than those that aren't and if there were a way to pull that off on all of them, I recommend it.
ReplyDeleteI think Davis' comment is spot on. The lipstick would make these even more dramatic but I love that you are continuing to explore the human body and add different materials to enhance your images. I also agree with Michael, the more abstract photos are more successful .
ReplyDeleteI love that you used a milky water for your photos, it enhances the creativity. I can really see the intent with your photos. I really love the 9th photo because of the light skin with the milky water. I really appreciate your use of lighting in your photos, but in some of your photos theres a distracting ring around your subject. It would have been cool to see you use asymmetry or the rule of thirds while shooting, so that you have different weighted compositions.
ReplyDeleteThe shots of her face emerging from the water are really striking. Some of these could use more contrast in the details, but overall your experimentation with light really paid off.
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