I think you did a great job capturing some beautiful moments of your model, and successfully composed your photos in an interesting way by playing around with shadow and light. However, you still need to pay attention to the pure white in some of your photos like the hands of the model in picture seven. Also the focus of second and third photos are not the eyes which I think is most important in portraits since they convey human emotions.
I would have kept the second image and used a different image than the third because the close up brings more attention to the model. The slanted bars in your 7th image are a bit distracting.
You were able to capture interesting angles but I feel like your contrast may be too strong in some of your photos and your whites come off too strong as Samara mentioned
I think a few of these are somewhat repetitive, the 2nd and 3rd especially. All of these have good composition and contrast, except for the 6th and 10th one which just need a little bit more contrast I think.
Photos 2-5 feel a bit repetitive just because her head is positioned the same way in all of them, as well as the angle you shot them at. The editing is good but I think they would be more powerful if they were pushed one way or the other. Some feel rather grey, while others are extremely white or black.
Your photos seem the most like portraits out of all - the model is the center and takes up at least 80% of each photograph. You were photographing her, not just trying to take a snapshot.
I think you did a great job capturing some beautiful moments of your model, and successfully composed your photos in an interesting way by playing around with shadow and light. However, you still need to pay attention to the pure white in some of your photos like the hands of the model in picture seven. Also the focus of second and third photos are not the eyes which I think is most important in portraits since they convey human emotions.
ReplyDeleteI would have kept the second image and used a different image than the third because the close up brings more attention to the model. The slanted bars in your 7th image are a bit distracting.
ReplyDeleteYou were able to capture interesting angles but I feel like your contrast may be too strong in some of your photos and your whites come off too strong as Samara mentioned
ReplyDeleteI think a few of these are somewhat repetitive, the 2nd and 3rd especially. All of these have good composition and contrast, except for the 6th and 10th one which just need a little bit more contrast I think.
ReplyDeletePhotos 2-5 feel a bit repetitive just because her head is positioned the same way in all of them, as well as the angle you shot them at. The editing is good but I think they would be more powerful if they were pushed one way or the other. Some feel rather grey, while others are extremely white or black.
ReplyDeleteWhile repetitive, your editing needs a little push towards black or white to get the full flavor of the image.
ReplyDeleteYour photos seem the most like portraits out of all - the model is the center and takes up at least 80% of each photograph. You were photographing her, not just trying to take a snapshot.
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