I like the composition of your portrait shots (simple white background) but they came out a little grainy. I like how they captured a wide range of emotions/story, I would be interested in seeing a series where you captured the entire facial range of one person.
I like that you never centered your subject. It's interesting to see that most of your photos are almost full body but I wonder how you would capture more close up portraits.
I think that some of your pictures are redundant. Even though you used the same model, I think that if you changed poses more or even have done something along the lines of what Davis mentioned it would have made the photo story more interesting. I like the contrast of the model against the wide background, but I think that your photos could have been more in focus. I love the first photo!!!
The first one attracts my eyes lol. Your picture shows his facial expression vividly. And in the second one, the shadow and the person are kind of symmetric.
The first picture is a gem. Your photos are consistent but different angles would make them more engaging. They are a little grainy which takes away from the subject matter. I like the white background a lot.
I like that you decided to take your portrait photos in front of a white wall, which successfully bring out the people with the strong contrast. However, it will be better if you try some different angles and fields of depth.
I think your portraits are the most distinctive I've seen for far! They look well planned, as if you're in a professional studio and set up the lighting yourself. If anything, I'd play with the contrast a little more in photoshop to avoid the dull grays.
I like the running theme of all of these, especially how you captured such personality! I think they could use a bit more variety though, especially in angles and perspective.
I like the composition of your portrait shots (simple white background) but they came out a little grainy. I like how they captured a wide range of emotions/story, I would be interested in seeing a series where you captured the entire facial range of one person.
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ReplyDeleteI like that you never centered your subject. It's interesting to see that most of your photos are almost full body but I wonder how you would capture more close up portraits.
ReplyDeleteI think that some of your pictures are redundant. Even though you used the same model, I think that if you changed poses more or even have done something along the lines of what Davis mentioned it would have made the photo story more interesting. I like the contrast of the model against the wide background, but I think that your photos could have been more in focus.
ReplyDeleteI love the first photo!!!
The first one attracts my eyes lol. Your picture shows his facial expression vividly. And in the second one, the shadow and the person are kind of symmetric.
ReplyDeleteThe first picture is a gem. Your photos are consistent but different angles would make them more engaging. They are a little grainy which takes away from the subject matter. I like the white background a lot.
ReplyDeleteThe wide range of emotions that you captured is really cool. I like that you also played with framing and the placement of your subject.
ReplyDeleteI like that you decided to take your portrait photos in front of a white wall, which successfully bring out the people with the strong contrast. However, it will be better if you try some different angles and fields of depth.
ReplyDeleteI think your portraits are the most distinctive I've seen for far! They look well planned, as if you're in a professional studio and set up the lighting yourself. If anything, I'd play with the contrast a little more in photoshop to avoid the dull grays.
ReplyDeleteI like the running theme of all of these, especially how you captured such personality! I think they could use a bit more variety though, especially in angles and perspective.
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